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I keep
        mystery
        on my sleeve;
peacocks fall as fuzz
              from
pea coats,
but not mine;
I deeper ↔ have
     pockets,
           more
brittle           leaves
               ;a
lapel        that  re-
  pels  every
              fairy
             it   sees—
such       is a      fitting
      garb  for  one
             wanton
      gyp  -    sy, as
             happy  as
                  he      can
                  be   —
yet,
       tonight
I                 think
       there
       flurries,                      out
up    -
       on
       the       brink,
of
little th   -              ings
          that
          flock
      and   skip
      and       twink'
                ,
              or        -
      gasmic      in
       their       eve-
            ry
          tiny    blink              . . .
      my
      moth-         er
          took      her
       fancy       in
       the         ones
    with                wings
                ,
      mis  -          taking
                     one
             for                         
      Gabriel ,    one
             for
          Michael
              or
                a       thing;
but
I    know
       there
            more
       to
       these
   than
just    heavenly
                   dreams
                    (in -
duced              by
       al'manic
          manner
of                  key
                      by
                      lite
of  electric      kite-
                        string);
             for
             here
I                     flit',
             here
I                 stop
          to         sip
          the          rain,
          to     gather
          whether in
          throw       -  ing
off   golden
          feathers
I                 have
                  been
                        sane
          to     capture
                  ev'ry
          meteorite
                     by
                        name,
down   my
       glassy neck
                      in-
          to        my
                 bottle-
                       frame,
            'haling Heaven's
fires    to          light
                     my veins
                            (nestling
   petals           of
                     my
                  collar:
                 blackened
                        -
                  crimson
                        sash
             for
                        shame;
                 blossomed
                 bat-wings
                  cuddle
       g             -in
                       in
                        svelte
                        sau
                        -
          toir
          torn
             from  my
                 br  -im);
       now            sucking
d      -own          said
                        Seraph
                      -im,
I                 cork
                     my
          mouth
      and              settle
                         satyrs'
       nitroglycerins
          to
             fix
          this
            elixir    of
                         stale,
                         sp   -
      ark               - ling
                         sin;
I          kiss
          the    cauter
        on          my
                   ch-in
      and
          then                       . . .
                     my
                     head
                    (my
                     heart)
                        —
                   bronze
                    eyes
                        in
                   brows
                    em-
                   broidered
                        in
                        —
          the        Earth
                        shakes
    with       a      s      -
                           pin
                                       . . .                                                                                                                
Trinity...coming with the clouds of heaven.

"We are like clay jars in which this treasure is stored.
The real power comes from God and not from us."

A third angel followed them and said in a loud voice,
"Anyone who worships the beast or its image,
or accepts its mark on forehead or hand,
will also drink the wine of God's fury,
poured full strength into the cup of his wrath,
and will be tormented in burning sulfur
before the holy angels and before the Lamb...


6/24/05 (all dates important)
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Many-eyeshere's avatar
You know you write in a Post-Modern style and use deconstructalism (Oh am I assuming too much?), yet you argue of Modernist truth and perception.

You have been defensive to everyone who has given you a comment, regardless of criticsm or praise. The point of writing and composing prose and verse is in modern society for others, if you do not want their opinion then don't post or simply state you do not want a comment unless it adheres to these regulations.

If you do not want others opinions then don't post or get a blogger make it completely private and post there, where it is completely safe from opinion and criticism. But the point you even use this website is because you want responses.

All these arguments are just attempts to boost your ego.

If you plan to write in a post-modern style with deconstructuralism, then you should at least remember that "all truth is subjective", or "there is no one universial truth".

See if this was Shakespeare or Wilmot, Byron, Thomas any pre-modernist or modernist poets I could understand your arguement, but frankly I cannot.

Learn to accept criticism, and also learn your literacy theory before insulting people who have tried to offer you help and encouragement.

By the way, I'm a friggin seventeen year old Australian English student and I seem to know more about literacy theory than you do.

Either learn the thoery or philosophy or adopt your own. But do not write in a theory without its understanding.

Also many before you have written with post-structuralism, do not think it is exclusivly yours. Also E.E Cummings is not a post-structuralist strangely, he was before the movement whatever he is I have forgotten. So don't refer to him either to justify your ends.

Otherwise your work is quite good, but you need to realise the relationship between language, metonmy and meaning. YOu have given a good attempt here to express them but overall it needs perfecting. This can be helped with literacy theory, try Bendetto Croce to get you started.